Author: arronyans
Reviewer: Guilun0123
Review..............
Title: 5/5
I think that you title is amazingly catchy. It caught my attention when I 1st read it. It wasn't common at all except the word love but equilubrium changed it into a not so common title.
Overall Appearance: 7/10
I LOVE the poster and background but I think there are too much words. Don't you? I advice you to lessen the words next time.
Forewords: 6/10
Even if you told the story from each other's perspective it would help a lot if you stated down the character's information. I think that you should describe Wu Chun's feelings towards Ella. That way it'll be much better even if it's common-ish.
Plot:14/15
Your plot was great! I loved how there were so many various moments. Jealous moments, sweet moments, cute moments! It's absolutely perfect but you would get a full mark if you added more dialogue. I prefer stories with more talking.
Creativity/Originality: 9/15
I'm sorry but to me, your story is a little common. Most stories have the same plot. Most of them were common. The love triangle and the pairings. Even so, I have to admit your story is pretty creative.
Speed Flow: 5/10
I think that the first few chapters of your story went alitlte too fast. Even though It isn't impossible but I would prefer if you slowed it down a bit.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocab: 6/10
There are a few common mistakes. I still understood what you were talking about so it's okay I guess.
Characterization: 9/10
I think you should describe the other characters a little more.
Writing Style: 10/10
I have no problems with you style of writing.
Overall Enjoyment: 3/5
As I said before, your story was a little common.
Sub Total: 74
Bonus: 5/5
Grand Total: 79
